yet world sways by sweet breaths
glimpse of truth douses in undertone
some are sung by our own melody
some are yet unsung by the reality,
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Your poem is very strong and true i agree with it and its a very well written logic poem very well done
Dr Kar, I read and read this with a haunted breath, seemingly lost in the ocean of ideas and ethereal feelings. A master piece.
Nice poem with a very philosphical title and content! ...............
Well written poem.........You leave behing a very strong message.........10
this is a wonderful poem filled by wisdom and philosophy..it touched my mind..it desrve another visit later..will keep it on my favorite..
another astonishing ideas being shared.... deep thoughts flowing in this write...interesting with very deep poetic words..as usual.. only you is the master of this kind of write... sends us a message of truth... on things uncertain in this world we cant have all we wanted to have... we cant do all we wanted to do... sometimes one has to sulk and depart... with own reason....logical or mysterious its part of life.. with very deep poetic words..as usual.. u shared with us a very significant piece painting a picture with your deep words yet it brings out a vivid picture of the message you want to portray... thanks for sharing 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
The necessity is so necessary you showed it all through your writing...Beautiful.10=
A very thought-provoking write, held my attention throughout, well penned 10 Lynda xx
From title to the end.. just one word... Wow... Not saying it as people usually say on PH for every write... :) But if you deeply read each line and think, and rethink, try to grasp the whole of it, try to read what is in your mind; what you exactly mean... it's amazing stuff... my mind first getting vagabond then catching your rhythm... and in the end haunted breaths somersault in us, do we ever forsake those unknowables? keeping shadow of inevitability betiding by the necessity own reeks of irrelevance. Dr Kar... the thing which is relevant to me might be irrelevant to you... We humans are made up on the basis of similarity yet diversity... still I feel like this world should ponder now, what is relevant and what is not... We got to think... And you made me think and this is the best quality of a great Poet, if he/she can make you think... God bless you Kamran
a really wonderful poem, thank you for sharing................10++++++++++
From : Ruth Lavelle (Kilkenny Ireland; Female; 26) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 9/27/2009 6: 11: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Hi from Ruth: -) Ah, yet again, my friend, what a wonderful poem! ! ! 'Haunted breaths somersault in us' - this I think is the most powerfully evocative of all your lines in this poem but that is just my modest mere opinion. I am taken by the 'haunted breaths', the people who once were in ourl ives but are now absent. I will read it again at a later date because it is past midnight now! ! ! in Ireland that is! ! : -) HAve you read my new poems, what do you think of 'Fawn'.... or even 'Poem For Him By Her'.... thank you for saying you value my opinion, I too look forward to hearing your response to my poems. Your friend, Ruth L.: -)
From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.