Near Though Far Comments

Vibrant and Hilarious Aung Its worth it... Agreed Sir Thomas... You should be proud

After reading this poem, only one that I can say is I have taken my hat off! ! ! ! ! The idea, style, words, tunes, verses, and so so in your poem are really great..no..no..more than great! ! ! I really appreciate you! ! ! !

You clearly are in love with this girl a lot I feel that you hope that everything that happens in the day reminds her of you and you seem to be seperated by distance but clearly it hasn't stopped you thinking of her any less, the words again in this poem are simply and greatly used in giving us a image of the events that each part of the poem descripes wonderful work. And I hope for the best for you two.