Tuesday, October 9, 2018

Near This Pond An Autumn Day Comments

Rating: 4.9

Reed plants have grown,
Grown are the plans here,
Near this pond they think,
An autumn day has come.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 08 June 2020

Autumn plays near pond with marvellous appearance. Autumn sings and motivates us. The beauty of autumn is painted by your artistic mind here.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2019

Spirituality and nature, two of the more recurring themes, what a wonderful, imaginative write this! And with an equally beautiful picture accompanying.

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Mj Lemon 26 October 2018

A moment of pause and a moment of clarity. This verse reminds us what perfect stillness, clam, is. A great work, Kumarmani.

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M Asim Nehal 19 October 2018

Superb poem nicely backed by a wonderful picture. A picture says thousand words and your poem speaks volumes.10+

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 October 2018

There was a similar poem of yours I have read last week about reeds; and thanks to it, I was able to finally notice the reeds by a brook, where it meets the sea: a place I regularly go; but, strange enough, I never new they were there! But, your poem and this one, made me look at them and think about your poem!

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Rus Mer 14 October 2018

nature has got a Natural Beauty... Late Autumn seeks for whom....wintry tomb?

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Rebecca Navarre 13 October 2018

Oh, what a beautiful feel, in the beauty in the awe, that's painted here! .. Ever so heart moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10/10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ And ever so beautiful picture too! .. :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 October 2018

A wonderful poem replete with imagery! Insightful message embodied in the text! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 October 2018

nice image is depicted here- Water is covered by leaves, Nature has given near joy, Humming beauty is summing, Day's gentle glaze is calm.

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Susan Williams 11 October 2018

nside the pond we see Fresh breeze swings more, Lotus flowers gently smile, White grass flowers giggle.- - - - this is a fresh way to see fall! well done! ! !

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Kelly Kurt 10 October 2018

A beautiful poem and picture.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 October 2018

Kumarmani, such a lovely poem....................10+++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 October 2018

A lovely imaginative write. It brings out the beauty and wonders of nature. Well crafted write.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2018

Date & Time: 10/9/2018 9: 24: 00 PM Member: Douglas Scotney Comment: Photo did come through KM. Nice poem though, but how does humming beauty sum?

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Muzahidul Reza 10 October 2018

humming beauty........ can hardly sum, well commment

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Rajnish Manga 09 October 2018

Great charm of nature during autumn deftly transported into this amazing poem. Truly a treat to nature lovers. Thanks for sharing it, Kumarmani ji.

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Dogma Daniman 09 October 2018

You have captured an interesting picture and nicely brought up natural imagery in this poem. Autumn scene is beautifully described.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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