Reed plants have grown,
Grown are the plans here,
Near this pond they think,
An autumn day has come.
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Spirituality and nature, two of the more recurring themes, what a wonderful, imaginative write this! And with an equally beautiful picture accompanying.
A moment of pause and a moment of clarity. This verse reminds us what perfect stillness, clam, is. A great work, Kumarmani.
Superb poem nicely backed by a wonderful picture. A picture says thousand words and your poem speaks volumes.10+
There was a similar poem of yours I have read last week about reeds; and thanks to it, I was able to finally notice the reeds by a brook, where it meets the sea: a place I regularly go; but, strange enough, I never new they were there! But, your poem and this one, made me look at them and think about your poem!
nature has got a Natural Beauty... Late Autumn seeks for whom....wintry tomb?
Oh, what a beautiful feel, in the beauty in the awe, that's painted here! .. Ever so heart moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10/10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ And ever so beautiful picture too! .. :)
A wonderful poem replete with imagery! Insightful message embodied in the text! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10
nice image is depicted here- Water is covered by leaves, Nature has given near joy, Humming beauty is summing, Day's gentle glaze is calm.
nside the pond we see Fresh breeze swings more, Lotus flowers gently smile, White grass flowers giggle.- - - - this is a fresh way to see fall! well done! ! !
Kumarmani, such a lovely poem....................10+++++++++++++++
A lovely imaginative write. It brings out the beauty and wonders of nature. Well crafted write.10+++
Date & Time: 10/9/2018 9: 24: 00 PM Member: Douglas Scotney Comment: Photo did come through KM. Nice poem though, but how does humming beauty sum?
Great charm of nature during autumn deftly transported into this amazing poem. Truly a treat to nature lovers. Thanks for sharing it, Kumarmani ji.
You have captured an interesting picture and nicely brought up natural imagery in this poem. Autumn scene is beautifully described.
Autumn plays near pond with marvellous appearance. Autumn sings and motivates us. The beauty of autumn is painted by your artistic mind here.