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May there be a dawn after every night,
May there be peace instead of a fight.
May there be joy instead of sorrow,
May there be a friend instead of a foe.
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tanvi damle
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Geet Asher 17 March 2011

every negative thing has been rhymed with a postive thing really nyc :)

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Noel Horlanda 24 April 2010

Simple, humble, meaningful work of art. All lines created are positive in thoughts. In short think positive, that's what it is. Well done, mate.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 March 2010

very nice.love the purity and simplicity of the poem.

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g black black 25 January 2010

good for you tanvi, , , , very nice prayer, , i like it

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Ivor Hogg 24 January 2010

i liked your theme but the constantly repeated phrasw may there be grew boring

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 January 2010

May everyone like a star shine, May their life be as good as mine! .....................ya so lovely to begin with....one should pray for others......10 tead mine...prayer for friend.... humble submission

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Sebastine Humaemo 04 December 2008

................May there be a rise after every fall, .................................May Lord answer everyone's call.................. beautiful lines....makes lot of sense....

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Tanvi you have made a great job, congratulations! ! Everybody needs think in a positive way like you!

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L R 03 December 2008

I live your creativity with the repitition- it's flowing and it is very well written. L

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Indira Babbellapati 24 November 2008

a sincere prayer, indeed, for the humanity!

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Risha : Ahmed 23 November 2008

Greeting card makers will run after it!

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Andrew Rose 23 November 2008

May everyone take heed =) good poem

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2008

Amen! You have written a nice poem. Its really good Thanks for sharing with me

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