May there be a dawn after every night,
May there be peace instead of a fight.
May there be joy instead of sorrow,
May there be a friend instead of a foe.
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Simple, humble, meaningful work of art. All lines created are positive in thoughts. In short think positive, that's what it is. Well done, mate.
i liked your theme but the constantly repeated phrasw may there be grew boring
May everyone like a star shine, May their life be as good as mine! .....................ya so lovely to begin with....one should pray for others......10 tead mine...prayer for friend.... humble submission
................May there be a rise after every fall, .................................May Lord answer everyone's call.................. beautiful lines....makes lot of sense....
Tanvi you have made a great job, congratulations! ! Everybody needs think in a positive way like you!
I live your creativity with the repitition- it's flowing and it is very well written. L
Amen! You have written a nice poem. Its really good Thanks for sharing with me
every negative thing has been rhymed with a postive thing really nyc :)