Nazm! Comments

Muntazir wahan tu he Muntazir yahan mein hun Ab hijaab pulta de Mein ne Tere baaray mein Sunn rakha to sub se he Aur jaanay kub se he........ Thanks for sharing this lovly poem..

Jis ko chahate thay ham, Jis pe jaan dete thay. Jis ki izzaton ki ham yun qasam uthate thay.wo jahan main yakta hai. Usko kis ne dekha hai. Han usi ki razon ka. Aaj tazkra Jazib. Ajnabi ke lab se hai. Aur jaane kub se hai.

Kya baat hai...... Dil sada ka baaghi he Sirf khud se raazi he Be fikar jahan se he Per he ussko darr jitna Bus Tere ghazab se he Aur jaanay kub se he

A grand soulful write.

Mujhko aankh khulne se Kuchh nazar nhi aata Khwahishon keh jungle mein The world of desires is so...nothing is visible even while eyes are open. Beautiful stanzas of meaningful lines. I am sure you can render this in English to open it for all. With what I know I can feel it but I cannot follow all the lines. Thank you.

Nihayat hee nafees, umda aur bhavuk (emotional) nazm...waaaaah

A masterpiece from your pen Shahzia, as if poured out from heart. Beautiful poem with good rhyming. I loved reading each lines. Loved it.

Unique, singular, masterpiece. In the best way i feel, emotions played in the lines. Best wishes aapi.