Monday, January 18, 2016

Nayi Dastaan-E-Mohobaat Comments

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Manzile hai mili nayi nayi
Hai umeed jagi dil me ab firse
Unki ankhoo me kho rahe hai hum
Raat o me jag jag ke sapne dekh rahe hai hum
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Souren Mondal
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Akhtar Jawad 01 February 2016

Hamein manavta ki nai yatra mein purane deep bujha kar naye chiragh jalane hon ge, kyunke hamein aage badhna hay, samrajywad ne shatabdion mein jo kutch humse cheen liya use wapas le kar aana hay, auor dharti ki mang ko ek bar phir taron se sajana hay. Ek bahut hi sunder kavita.

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M Asim Nehal 20 January 2016

Wah wah Kya baat hai.... Yeh shayri yun hi barkarar rahe, Phir se se mein ye bahar rahe Aap likhte rahe naye tarane hum phir se unhe gungunate rahe....

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Souren Mondal 21 January 2016

Hum sab ko zindigi me Khushuya aisi hi milti rahe Aaye jo nagme dil me Kagaz o me wo utarte rahe Sab saath mil ke hum Ek dusre ke tarane aise hi Rahe gaate, Zindigi doston ke saath Chalti rahe aise hi :) Thanks Asim :) May we all remain productive and write wonderful poems from the core of our hearts :)

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Abhilasha Bhatt 18 January 2016

Mili hai jo roshni use dil main jalaye rakhna Mila hai jo sathi uska sath banaye rakhna Zindagi ki raahon main kadam milaye rakhna... :) Beautiful poem...liked it....thank u for sharing :)

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Souren Mondal 21 January 2016

Thank you for reading Abhilasha.. Roshni dil me jalti rahe Saathe unka bana rahe Zindigi me ekbar wo jo Tham le haath humara Kadam se kadam milake Saathe unke hum chalte yunhi rahe :)

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Rajnish Manga 18 January 2016

निराशा के अँधेरे में बैठे हुए दिल को जैसे उम्मीद की किरन मिल जाये तो भावनायें फिर से हिलोरें लेने लगती हैं. बहुत सुंदर चित्रं. धन्यवाद, सोरेन जी. Jo dil kabhi gaya tha toot Aj phirse dharak rahi hai kis ke liye? Phir se aayi hai roshni andhero me Amabas dekho gayi mit

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Souren Mondal 21 January 2016

Sukhriya Rajnish ji..

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