Monday, November 9, 2009

Navigating The Black Hole Comments

Rating: 3.2

I skirt the perimeter
Biding my time,
Walking on eggshells,
Avoiding the crime
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Linda Ori
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Daniel Kempson 09 November 2009

Felt the pain in this honest piece of work Linda, a very strong personal write 10 Daniel. Can't believe some prat has marked this down

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David Harris 09 November 2009

Linda, this is heartfelt as if you walked that line at some time. Your wonderful way with words made me drift through each line with ease of this poem of hurting for someone. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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