Sunday, September 13, 2015

Naughty Cupid Comments

Rating: 5.0

What a poison you injected in me
With the sting of your arrow,
You struck me so deep inside,
I’m shivering with a rigor
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 13 September 2015

Amitava, your poem is sad, but yet uplifting at the same time, letting everyone know that love is beautiful and fantastic when you are together, yet stinging with pain when you are finally separated by death. That arrow's sting of love is very addictive in spite of what we end up going through in our lives, it was well worth it to have had that deep and inspiring love. Although without it life is then filled with sorrow, emptiness and loneliness. Great rhythm and expression of feelings and emotions. Smiling with a tear in my eyes. Beautiful and enticing poem, Little One. Totally enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 20 September 2015

Thanks a lot RoseAnn for making such a detailed analysis on my poem

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David Wood 13 September 2015

O’ you naughty Cupid, Although your sting is so vicious and torrid! Undoubtedly it gives a tangy and sweet pain. I think Cupid has given up on me! Good ink.

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Amitava Sur 20 September 2015

Thank you David for your comment

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