Monday, August 27, 2018

Natures Love Comments

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Natures Love

Spurt of water falling from the hills,
Serene calm and full of thrill,
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Rashmi Gupta
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Ishita 28 August 2018

Nice lines. Pure feelings :

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Chinedu Dike 28 August 2018

Well conceived and elegantly crafted in beautiful rhyme scheme with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Rashmi and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 August 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Rashmi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bri Edwards 27 August 2018

oops! i was in a hurry and forgot to finish reading and commenting! i like poem. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 27 August 2018

favorite lines so far: Taste of showers on my lips, Covers my mouth with icy drips bri ;)

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Rashmi Gupta 27 August 2018

Thanks again :)

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