Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Natures Design Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked by a winding babbling brook,
Which reflected like stars the beams of the sun,
As they shone on the watery stream having fun,
And the ground was all dappled, in shadow and light,
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Damian Cranney
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Unwritten Soul 08 August 2016

You mix the excitement, wory, and some other emotion in your adventurous write, and thats make your poem sparks! :) keep it up

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Damian Cranney

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