Dimmed to infiltrate the forest of the night
The single lamp post of the moon,
Shines her recycled yesterday's sunshine,
The leaves move in harmony rustling the tune
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Ken, this is good poem, descriptive with readily accessible imagery. Thanks for sharing.
'Mankind consumes everything, Coaxing Mother nature's wrath to sting! ' An inspired poem Ken themed in realities, of the laws of nature with contrasts, of observational brilliant insight sustained, line by line building to the ultimate climatic revelation; destructive humanity baits all creation, not according to kill or be killed but by ultimate control or destroy insanity, pending nature's sting back survival ploy. Beautiful :) Terence
Agony n’ Ecstasy of flora n’ fauna [mainly] well penned n’ poemed … Poet has unshackled the psyche n’ mindset by delving deep into them [as if]… 1st few lines the backdropp was poetically engineered befitting for this poetry n’ climaxed when the end came U Turn. ‘Coaxing Mother nature's wrath to sting! ’ Indeed a joy ride [read biblio safari] n’ read of this magnificent poem…great…wow! … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Ken Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Hi..Liked it so much very well written and we get the exact feel about the jungle. Really amazing...
Night Nature and Life...a matured write on how life consumes and get consumed...10
you know what, i like it it seems a remnant of essence of the jungles! the sounds produce by the lines... the pictures create by the lines.. i like it!
hello poetry you extermely sensitive to the tragy of human life looks dark i hardly your poetry traslated with google fallen in love with you....... ...........
for all home counter top with my turtle out the world to go to......... ....
Wow...It flows like honey across the page, painting a beautiful scenario in my head...Really well done
'Survival of the fittest' is nature's rule, but it seems that human being is consuming every thing now, mountains, rivers, forests, everything irrespective of day or night. Your plea to save the forest of the night is heart touching. You have created an amazing poem, Ken, with wonderful real life imagery...10/10. Best Regards. Naseer
i think i've read and commented on this before but it's nice seeing it again!
dear ken.....amazing poem on sights and sounds in the forest.the predators are out for their drill and kill, and so also all animals.it is all a fight for survival, and of the fittest.the sounds in the forest enthralls me, more.lovely poem, after my heart.best wishes. ritty
dear ken....it is a amazing poem from a man who has lived his life in the forest.the night sights are eerie and scary both, when the predators are out for their drill and kill 1many a times i have been to the forest for shikar...with my dad, and the experience has been a rewarding one.loved your poem. best wishes, ritty
oooh. This one is interesting and i say, it is good!
sentimental hotch-potch.......do u want us to cry.........good poem devoid of content.........may u read many books......to have idea and ideas...and ur own idea thanks for let us to read u............good soul.....wish many of u
This is a wonderful poem Ken, I liked the metaphors and the flow of the poem was faultless, expertly done,10.
Ken, I was drenched from the single lamp post of the moon, to savour the richness you witnessed... sometimes at night we go there FOR ESTeem rebuilding... often tis for greed... last line.. ouch...
The leaves move in harmony rustling the tune With the floor moving with life with extreme evening sight, Rachel Ann Butler
So consumes her lover, In the forest of the night. As the early morning bird doth sing Mankind consumes everything....what to talk of mankind. they will violate even sanctity of forest nights too...mankind consumes everything n u r perfectly right is saying so...10 read mine....why do we neglcet the nature..
Beautiful words, love this poem. Gave it an excellent