Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Natures Bounty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silently the winter nights creep in.
The summer days have gone
And the Autumns rich colours are starting to thin
And the birds to the south have flown.
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Holly Jamestone 29 March 2014

Beautifully written with wonderful imagery. The last stanza offers a glimpse of a promise for Spring, and now it's here! Really loved this piece, your rhyme and cadence! -Holly Jamestone

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

great poem with great imagery

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Wonderful write Sir and I welcome you to my page too......

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John Mccullagh 16 October 2013

A good piece of work, mark

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Lyn Paul 15 October 2013

Natures abubdant store. Great words Mark. Beautifully pieced together

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Mark Dillon

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