Thursday, November 19, 2009

Natures Ballet Comments

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From my stance upon the clifftop
I can see the waves crash below
The foam rages and froths upon
Rocks that fight to stay above
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Fiona Davidson
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Premila Patel 18 May 2015

Seduction by the natures beast! Sounded like a mindblowing experience.. How dare you take so much pleasure! xxx

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Carl Harris 21 November 2009

This is an exceptionally well expressed poem on the awe of watching of a storm, Fi, and your quite vivid imagery in this fine write made your readers able to feel and see the awesome power of nature like they were there themselves. Carl.

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maggie murray 20 November 2009

welcome back with a beautifully penned dance...the emotion is evident Maggie x

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Fay Slimm 20 November 2009

Vivid scene which you paint with eloquent pen Fi..... glad to see you posting once again - - greetings from friend. Fay.... xx

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Carol Gall 19 November 2009

lovely words fi can feel the sea spray 10

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