Nature (Translation Of My Urdu Poem Fitrat) Comments

Nature is the beloved of many, a seductress who enchants poets and lovers with her alluring charms! A lovely dedication to Nature Goddess! Enjoyed reading!

A very good poem but the Urdu poem written in poet's own mother language is is miles ahead of it.

Who will not love such a nature as you've described in your poem...nature has dangerous pitfalls, disasters and all else qualities too...but a true nature-lover admires that too as it is god made and divine...a true poet like you can easily fall in love with nature and no wonder you've shared such a marvelous poem here....excellent work Akhtar..thanks a lot for this poem

As per thought action is planned and ambition is made for achievement. You are scared to the perfume made by flowers. I open my eyes and look at the sky. You call your colors in seven colors of the globe. These colours will give you a nice perception. But just in the scenes of the river, you dump your picture and bring royal smile for me. The entire body of the oxygen is hidden from the blond body and people may not like this. All need fresh oxygen for survival. An amazing poem on nature is vividly presented in fabulous and marvelous way. Brilliant perspective is outlined..10