Nature Trail Comments

Lovely, lively. Top score

I especially enjoyed this because I'm a Nature-lover and fan of good rhyming. 5 stars. bri ;)

See Kim Barney's response to my earlier comment. YES I knew 'nick' (in British slang = steal, and I knew it PROBABLY wasn't a typo for 'lick'.

Very pleasant reading, with some nice rhymes.

'nick my nuts' OCHY, I say! ! ! bri ;)

I bet you sit in your garden and write. Beautiful poem.

A wonderful poem on nature packed with activities of tiny creatures.... liked it.

There are caterpillars waiting For their time to come to fly, There are worms turning the earth over As ladybirds fly by, Birds will visit, cats will visit But they always chose their time. a wonderful thoughtful poem. tony

squirrels come to nick my nuts -Benjamin Zephaniah 2003

" squirrels come to nick my nuts" -Benjamin Zephaniah 2003

here's a baby daddy long legs And an easy-going snail And a family of woodlice, All are on my nature trail. they are all on my trail. a fine poem. tony

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One cannot help visualizing these animals and insects in our minds as we read this lovely poem.

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Lovely

I will publish this song about nature trail.

There are caterpillars waiting For their time to come to fly, There are worms turning the earth over As ladybirds fly by, Birds will visit, cats will visit very fine poem. tony

My garden is a lively place There's always something happening, There's this constant search for food And then there's all that flowering, .......all families of the nature on the natural trails; all make their life according to own wish and adaptation; beautifully delineated the characteristics of nature, insects life; nice to read

Nature trail described in a very poetic parlance. Loved the rhyming. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

Excellent poem displaying the finest beauty of nature. What a trail. Thank you