Friday, October 26, 2018

Nature's Whisper Comments

Rating: 5.0

A soft whisper from nature has entered my breath
I swallowed and inhaled it to my lungs' deepest depth
and now it is tickling my heart and my mind
It keeps humming a song of love and being kind
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Aufie Zophy
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Mihaela Pirjol 07 November 2018

Well-written stanzas with cadence and rhymes, and an harmonious feeling of serenity.

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