Wednesday, January 16, 2019

Nature's Way Comments

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A whirlwind you swept me off my feet, had me all dizzy
Love blossomed like small buds turning into a beautiful lily
We danced until drenched in warm April showers
Our roots were as deep as oak trees, together we had power
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Jennifer Birchall
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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

Very beautiful poem.... thanks. .nature is guiding spirit

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 21 January 2019

such a beautiful poem! nice one! nature has a divine power to do everything as Wordsworth, nature worshiper said.

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Amir Marandi 18 January 2019

Whirlpool of emotions painting the happiness, hardship and love lost. Do't be discouraged by physical obstacles. It is a cliche, but there is always light at the end of tunnel. You are close the end.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 January 2019

A well penned poem, dear Jennifer............................

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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