Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Nature's Uncetainties Comments

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From the east comes a hurrying clouds
The young ones join the mature ones
Soon they become a unified body
It looks like a fierce lioness
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Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour
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John Raubenheimer 27 May 2012

Thank you for sharing your poetry Duku. Your strength is an eye for drama and detail and there is passion in your description of a storm building up. English is obviously not your first language... Have you thought of writing in your mother-tongue and finding a translator?

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