Thursday, January 15, 2009

Nature's Revenge Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flood in the city,
Noise of a crying baby,
Great adversity.
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Juneil Sechico
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Josiah Njenga 16 May 2018

Nice poem..so painful to find have tampered, destroyed the nature....cutting down tree, diverting the natural river from their natural paths..people are crying now and over the death of their people's... it's a blame...nature must revenge..

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This poem has a great purpose and so much wisdom. You have so many meaningful images - 'noise of a crying baby', 'we took her beauty now she will take our life we reap what we sow. 'wealth blown by the wind'. Your title ties up magnificently with the closing stanza and it is very impressive work. 10 Karin Anderson

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~ Jon London ~ 22 January 2009

Very well expressed piece of poetic flow.....I enjoyed reading this emotional write...well done. Keep expressing Jon

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Indira Babbellapati 21 January 2009

u well presented the consequences of treating what nurtures us in an inhuman manner...

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Fay Slimm 15 January 2009

This is so strongly yet beautifully thought through - - - is has such appeal in it's report of the event, but with conclusive understanding - - that it needs rereading and digesting to feel the emotions of the writer......... excellent........10 + + + from Fay

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it's true when the nature revenge we can do nothing about it but find ways to save our life. We have to protect mother earth even for a simple way. As a former member of Society of Environmentalist Activist we always have activities to inculcate the importance of saving our planet and we did some forest and sea cleaning. Nice piece Juneil thanks...

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it's true when the nature revenge we can do nothing about it but find ways to save our life. We have to protect mother earth even for a simple way. As a former member of Society of Environmentalist Activist we always have activities to inculcate the importance of saving our planet and we did some forest and sea cleaning. Nice piece Juneil thanks...

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Sadiqullah Khan 15 January 2009

What we do to nature, the nature is still kind, , well written Sechico

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Meggie Gultiano 15 January 2009

yes, i have learned what happened in your place, and it was really awful. Man destroyed what the gift of nature should have been preserve and careful..Now, it goes back to man again.I hope and pray that everything will be alright there in your place..God bless you.Shalom! love, Meggie

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Juneil Sechico

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