Wednesday, June 7, 2006

Nature's Purity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come buds break forth and greet the spring,
And dress the world in garments new,
Such subtle shades you'll gently bring,
When winter bids us all adieu.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 21 October 2008

This is brilliant, shade of A.E Housman, beautifully written. One for my list to keep. Love, Andrew x

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Uriah Hamilton 07 June 2006

I just heard a song called Sprintime Can Kill You by Jolie Holland. Maybe there is too much hope to be dashed. Lovely poem, my friend. Uriah

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Chuck Audette 07 June 2006

Wonderful poem - a very 'high poetry' feel to this. Thought the last line might benefit by losing a syllable (?) . p.s. Perhaps you'd be so kind as to give me suggestions on my poem 'Underdressed' - also a tree one? Thanks! -chuck

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Duncan Wyllie 07 June 2006

Both you and nature seem to walk hand in hand Ernestine as you speak of her she speaks through you Love Duncan x

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Patricia Gale 07 June 2006

A rich and splendid read this is. Lovely work. Patricia

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Sonny Rainshine 07 June 2006

Ah, spring: my second favorite season, after summer.

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