Thursday, November 8, 2012

Nature's Music Comments

Rating: 4.5

There's a secret place
Where eyes see for miles.
Flicking over the land
They spectate a serene dance.
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Jack Shimmin 08 November 2012

The imagery is awesome, just vivid enough, but room for imagination of my own. Found it hard to get a rhythm while reading, but no biggy if you weren't going for one :) I like anything on the concept of the world and or nature, and it does speak well for the seasons and cycles your portraying.

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