Nature's Lullaby Comments

Loved this poem, the ways of nature is so wonderful, never exhausts the mysteries they keep

The morn so adorned by waves in sand where lovers stand and perfume of flowers, an escape of everyday life, sun’s rays in all our days filling the soul, a tender moon surrenders to dreams saying goodbye with a lullaby – what a great way to sing your poem today....

Dear Mt. Williams..I love this poem..short, sweet and to the point. Great job...Keep up the great work!

Great poem............................ The scent of flowers, paint a smile on thy face. keep it up

short and sweet lines.... soothing and rhyming lines! !

u a poet by hart, let your love 4 poetry continue to guide u thru ur works

Nature captured in a gentle lullaby flowing from start to finish you are on your way+++10 regards

Terrific poem. Beautiful, very poetic and yet, Real. Keep feeding our hungry souls with these nourishing fruits of your amazing talent.

Beautiful lullaby..........keep writing

Lovely Nice poem Keep it up

this makes me smile, very lovely thank you :)

Superb and uplifting poem I love the themes. The rhymes are good

Lovely poem, well written and rhymed.

Dear Theo, your poems is Soothing for me.

NIce one it is really a nice creation

Mr Williams, This is a great write there Lad. It has a nice flow to it..And I loved your use of the couplets. Very Nice Piece of Poetry. Keep up the great work!

it's a beautiful lulaby...indeed some music, a little breeze, mating of birds...i can already imagine it...would only add some more spice to it...

Add some violin when reading this and voila!

Nice conceptualization, even freedom of meter and form.

This poem is very lovely! You are so talented with your words!