Nature's Love Song (A Sonnet) Comments

Yeah, I have to agree with C. H. questioning this as a work in progress. This read like warm butter (I try not to use the word 'flow') and was as clear as HDTV. Purely Dawn-esque in every aspect.

Fade and blushing, definitely. Work in progress? This is done and done well.

Excellent work here Dawn, and what a novel thing to include your readers in the composition. I volunteer fade for the first invite, and blushing in the second case, and for the third I choose flush as it seems to herald the light so well. A very well deserved ten.

lovely verses..nicely written and to read... thanks for sharing.. Ency Bearis