Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Nature's Incarnation Comments

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Soaring the displaced glorious rapture
Recently cracked cubes reform to lush
The vigorous vulture returns to gnaw
Exposing enough to see the nurturing light
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Oni Hayes
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Derrick Clark 02 May 2007

that was a great write, keep it up.

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Stunning work, O.B....Powerful written elocution...immagework is effulgent... Structure, mellifluous...Solid crafting all-around. FjR

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