May N

May N

Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Nature's Chaos Comments

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dreary day, the sky cries its pain
screaming thunder echoes throughout
flashing anger in streaks of white
life beckons for the savior sun
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Aiswarya. T.anish 25 March 2009

Yeah! This poem gave the vivid description. Colour fades......I agree and the sky cries out in pain. When I was in pre-shool, I used to wonder how lightning came. At first I thought someone was there, throwing it at the Earth but later on, I studied it in Science. Good poem.

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Lindsey Ashton 22 October 2008

This is a good expression of depression, not only a gray sky, but a gray outlook on life. good poem.

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May N

Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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