Nature's Call Comments

interesting poem really enjoy to read it

nice depiction new bottle with old wine so nice

This is a nice diversion Aswath! Quite interestingly presented! As you feel relieved, we too feel relieved! Holding it is not good for health... you know! But as Kavya has said, I have read it before! So you are good at humour too!

@Dinesh Sir: Yeah why not! I'm certainly against various publicity stunts especially like the one mentioned above. That horrific day, I learnt a valuable lesson, never to neglect the nature's call. Ofcourse I failed to write a disclaimer and this write to be treated as funny and as a joke only. I believe I have taken necessary precautions and editing to suit this to all age group without gender bias! @Shahzia Didi: If comments had a greater influence on me, I would have written a new poem instead of posting an old one. Wouldn't I?

bro, i remember having read this earlier...this is from your deleted poems list, rite! gud one and v hilarious

nice piece of writing.............

another gem from your magic box. a little humor is always good

the effect of 2 comments: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Geetha Jayakumar(8/28/2013 11: 53: 00 AM) Dear Aswath, if you are again writing any such poems, I will not comment on it..... - - - - - - - - - - - - - spread the light of wisdom..Am sorry, if am too harsh in my comments.. - - - - - - - - - - - - Dinesh Nair(8/27/2013 8: 42: 00 AM) .... And yet another death poem is in your mind! Be dynamic Aswath for a little longer and go for a subdued outlook at these fantasised woes queuing up somewhere. About turn!

Yeah....Some funny ones coming your way....Good...The way you have written is simply beautiful.. I start typing poem with funny ones but by the time it reaches the finishing point, something unexpected happens in my head and my hand sense it and starts typing into some painful ones....