Nature's Bride Comments
The porcelain empyreal
Blended itself
Like a bride
In the palette of
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The bride is what? More nature? Or an ethereal porcelain doll in some fantastic natural light? Sometimes I'm so dense. I don't get it.
A wonderful poetic portrait of a demure bride..beautifully written..
On the waterline of its eyes, And with the orange veil It cloaked & hid it's Shy face covering and Containing the sky. Nice poem. Thanks poet. 10
Beautiful and stands out ranked atop...excellent...10+++++++++
It mascaraed it's lashed rays That curled down On the waterline of its eyes, And with the orange veil It cloaked & hid it's Shy face covering and Containing the sky. Beautiful lines. Nicely written poem. 10+++.
beauty of the Nature is described in the most interesting way with clever use of words. Congrats. It deserves 10++++
Beautiful poem with fantastic depiction. Thanks and congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.
The poemitself is well decorated bide, a nice selection as members' poem of the day.
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a wonderful descriptive poem of natural beauty at it's finest? ............well writtenND.
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Such a nice poem of the day... congrats, Nayanika.... Rated 10+++++
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With ruby mascara It mascaraed it's lashed rays That curled down On the waterline of its eyes, And with the orange veil It cloaked & hid it's Shy face covering and Containing the sky. - - - - - - - - A fine poetic expression describing Nature in a bridal make-up.Shy face covering and containing the sky- -This line I like most.What a poetic imagination contained there ! !
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