There is a misty sky above
below silence exists
but for the rhythmic ker-plop
of the water beads
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Gorgeous imagery and creative water sound words. The last stanza, the grand finale of streetlights, is a fitting and wonderful end to a beautiful poem. 10 Karin Anderson
nice work takes you there i like this poem well done a 10 on this one from me
lovely and gracious! ! ! keep writing! ! ! Dear, Carol, could you read and comment on my new poem, Fantaisie rustique, please? Thank you.
Enjoyed immensely. Great metaphor and imagery. Interesting onomatopoeias. Beautiful poem.