Thursday, June 4, 2015

Nature's Best Comments

Rating: 4.4

Playing with the dolphin of the deep, dark mystery that is the ocean,
Freedom is more then just a notion,
Waves crashing onto the waiting shore the tide always in constant motion,
Her lover's smile reminds her of the dolphin jumping for joy
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Hazel Durham
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Muzahidul Reza 31 August 2017

At the setting of the sun Their flame is still a flame, With no blame For their past mistakes, our good deeds remove our past mistakes, we should recognised, great written,10

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Chinedu Dike 27 January 2017

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Hazel.

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Mizzy ........ 07 September 2016

Really lovely Nature/Love collaboration Hazel, nicely merged into a poem throbbing with love. My favourite verse...... Connecting her heart to the elements, The truth is like an important letter sent, About her raw emotions as powerful as the waves, Surging with passion,

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 May 2016

A lovely aestival and romantic poem. As always, the imagery is absolutely beautiful!

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Clarence Prince 21 August 2015

Their flame is still aflame With no blame For their past mistakes I can just about imagine the loves shared! Nice job, Hazel!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2015

Nice depiction. Groovy collocation. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Lyn Paul 07 June 2015

The ocean is my favourite place watching the sunset it gives great answers to all..Natures Best.... truths. Beautiful words always from your pen.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2015

A well written and nicely described beauty, oceans and dolphins, nature's display of beauty.

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Sekharan Pookkat 07 June 2015

sea and seashore, ocean and wind tide and waves are always a big canvas for the poets of love who connects life and literature.

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Pregnant with a passion that blazes and burns with the fires of strong intimacy! Well done my friend!

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Valsa George 05 June 2015

And the ocean's eerie roar is like her lover shouting her name, Across the beach as she is standing out of his reach, Like she is a celebrity of some fame, Your poems are intimately connected with the sea! The depth, the width, the swirl and roar of love, I think can be best expressed through the metaphor of the ocean! Beautiful write!

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