Sunday, December 6, 2020

Nature's Beauty - Do Not Know Where Got Lost. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wrapped in morning rays, bathed in dewdrops
warming me up in this winter
It came down, spreading the wings
Then do not know where got lost in the crowd.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2020

A fascinating fairytale poem about nature and the spiritual thoughts, a summing up of sweet thoughts. Well captured superbly worded, dear great poet Asim Sir! 5 Stars for thee!

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Poetic Sky 08 December 2020

Best poem on nature. What a finish.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 December 2020

I loved the way the nature came down spreading its wings wrapped with morning rays and bathed in dew drops. Nature remains perfect and tranquil on its own, But the moment man interferes, then it really disappears! Frozen on the mountain top. Fabulous poem Asim ji........Top stars

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Suzon Albert 08 December 2020

Rich in vocabulary. Loved it Asim

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Suzon Albert 08 December 2020

Opening lines smite me off to the wonderful feeling and i flowed with the poem to explore the nature's beauty.

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Michael Jack 06 December 2020

Fabulous poem As soon as it was evening, I saw it in the bows Singing the song on the boat of the fishermen Under the tangerine veil of clouds

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 December 2020

DJ feels so is life and it's journey/philosophy. You have used nature to its perfection and constructed fabulous poem.

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David Paradine 06 December 2020

" Wrapped in the morning rays" ...............................great line

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 December 2020

Beautiful is all that I can say can add nothing its life refreshing Asim ji you are a lovely poet all can see what is PPME just a non entity Thank you for acceding to my request I bow to poets from whom I learn You are one such one A figure above the sunny clouds I don't know where my poetry about nature got lost

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

Good poem. Most likely nature disappeared after being polluted by man. It happens a lot

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