‘The two pitchers on pole, hanged on your nape,
consider them as your children.
Do not ignore the one that is feeble.
Give praise to the pitcher on your right that does a good job,
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I am honoured that you would dedicate a poem to me. I think this a most meaningful and deep poem. It flows well and leaves me thinking. You are a talented poet. Thank you so much.
A very nice poem, the question that is posed in the first stanza(creating tension) is addressed in the secong, , very fine imagery it was pleasure reading it, , a 10
This is a nice poem! Let us save the world through are poems! And Thank you for the comment to my poem 'Global Warming'.
Optimism in the mind of the persona, and hopefully the addressees may catch it as well. Yeah, this is indeed another reflection of the concluded summer Olympics. Nice strokes.
This poem is a beauty with a deep philosophy that makes you think. And the mellow rhythm is kinda soothing your mind and soul. Love it... ^-^