For the people in some parts of Asia or Africa
where a talented baby may become another Garcia Lorca
In the rough social conditions of the third world societies
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Man is an intelligent animal no matter where he lives. Whether his skin colour be black, white, yellow, brown, it makes no difference. It all boils down to opportunity. For some to have the opportunity others have to go without. For some to be wealthy others have to starve. For some to have access to more of their share of the finite resources on this earth others have to die. An important message here Ellias, well done.
Enjoyd d take on shakespeare and yes d third world has seen as many great ones as any world. Im an indian n i can tink of many greats includin Abdus salam, Avicenna(abu ali sina) Tagore, sarojini naidu, Al Geber(jabir ibn hayyan, Kahlil Gibran to name a few. So kudos i vote high for dis poem.
Wow, Eliaas and Nader, I truly like the message in this poem. Talents are everywhere around. So many young people have high ideals. I read once in a piece by RW Emerson, that you rarely see old sailors because many of them die young at sea. And then he went on to say that you see almost no old idealist because either their ideals or themselves die young. So many young talents far greater than Bieber are suppressed by violence, not only in the terms of real physical violence but more commonly even in terms of the violence of negativity and dirty politics (not only national poltics that is) .Far more people should nurture the great ideals of the young people. I like your optimism. I really hope many people nurture it and if not that your ideals and great observations of hidden talents, suvive all storms negativism. Idealism is not naieve. I am slightly over mddle age now and have been called naieve (initially in my face, now more behind my back) for keeping beleiving in the huge potential of this world to erupt in a huge kindness revolution. If that is what naieve means, I take naivity as a compliment. Keep it up. You will be heard, you will be read. Nothing, really nothing will able to contain the positive thoughts of the poetry. Poetry will change the world. It will boil over the brim, unstoppably. Excellent work. Again my very sincere congrats. Hans PS: A firm 10++++
u guys talented you have rose A message you know great poeple come out of uterus of hard time so keep up you are the hope
Hi talented boys Ellias & Nader, Well done, , It's an honor of mine to read poems of a gifted boy from my own country.We, both are in the same way Ellias. Hope to read more of you: p: p: p
good poem, there are many who are talented but few who are recognised, because of their position in life and just pure luck, its worldwide, but that does't take away from their character, they are still special.
This poem is full of passion and fire in your belly for social change, life is so cruel for the third world countries, in this poem you have given these noble people a voice. Thanks for sharing.
Ellias captain P? ? ? No...Better you renamed as Captain E.A (Ellias Anderson or Expert-Airplane haha) kinda remind me to Captain Cur, where is he now....must be going and sailor somewhere far_Soul
Hi dear Readers. i thank you all because of your warm attention. i should thank Nader because of his great words and sentences in this art. he gave existence to this work. I just want to offer this poem with my small heart to all unseen people. the people who have lived so sad with lots of problems. people who have made great people, and people who just God knows are greater. With love and infinity light. Captain A should change in an other name. i think Captain P is better, Captain People. the captain who will help the humanity. but who will he be? who can be pure as the rain's drops? Who will be a savior? For that day. E.A.
I agree with unwritten soul and I think it's message is very loud and clear. I respect that and hope some day the talents of the third world countries will have the opportunity to contribute and become wellknown.
first i would like to thank you dear Ellias.the whole work become marvelous and terrific.but still needs edition. in the line (In the rough conditions each newborn like Wolfenstein) .i didnt mean Wolfenstein-that computer game-ha ha ha...i meant FRANKENSTEIN.THE CREATURE IN Mary Shelley'S BOOK.please edit it. to all readers: we didnt want to insult anybody.Justin bieber is just a sample of different conditions....we wanted to show the difference between the conditions in which talented people want to be seen or they have to try and work double either they may be seen or not. once someone asked me if Einstein had been born in other place except Germany, what would have he become? i replied maybe a vender.ha ha ha.. have you ever noticed how many people are dying or have died in the past and nobody notices or noticed how talented they are or they were.if they ve had good education they might have become another Einstein or Federico garcia lorca.have u ever thought with good educations and good social conditions how many Beethovens, bachs, Schubers, we might have had in the world. so this is for all anonymous people died or die.they have or had right only good educations, conditions, then we can see all of them are, or were genius. again i thank you dear Ellias.and please do that edition.and i voted 10+++...ha ha ha.... cheers and and god bless~nb
It is very interesting and attractive...you(Ellias&Nader) efforts in making this a great lyrics... you expressed the truth.
THAT IS REALLY GO I HAVE NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT IT LIKE THAT
a nice job by two poets.i m sure poets of the world will do in this direction when rest of the world is engaged in making power or wealth. i salute my two poets for their precious contribution.
an excellent combination between two great poetic minds, all are talented in their own rights yet talent isn't more about talent but more how its shown and delivered, and how others decide to perceive it.. a great job well done
I think talent is only a word that shows the popularity, and each every one of ppl on the earth are talents.
Intense and real as this Justin character you dissaprove of, and rightly so. For all the people of Earth, this poem rings true, and that is why it succeeds so brilliantly...truth. Thank you for this. Elys
Combination of two fantastic Iranian poets, two different minds speak one ultimate and i Love it..Sure you have a beautiful idea about nurturing a nation naturally...the poem is amazing a big applause for both of you...well done and very nice combination of two. Dear Ellias you know what to say with pumping desires as a captain in the making hahaha, but must thanks to Nader too for him shading the poems with some colors, and that makes the poem has double tastes..keep it up my dear friends..much cheers for u two....but dont bring the name of Justin bieber or anyone here as a low comparison, respect them okay whatever they done, we need to focus what we can do.That's my comment_Soul
let the faith lead you to higherways