Saturday, August 10, 2019

Nature Of The Beast Comments

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Body Mangled
Cranium crushed
Blood dripping
Legs and arms twitch
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Bri Edwards 23 December 2019

P.S. the title attracted me, more so when i THOUGHT it was: Nature Of The Breast Yes, i'm milking** this for humor's sake. ** " to draw or coerce profit or advantage from illicitly or to an extreme degree: EXPLOIT milk the joke for all it's worth" bri :) bri :)

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Bri Edwards 23 December 2019

last line: i think " one's" I'll assume [note: arms and legs] that the " Wild Cats" are human. OR, seeing the " topics" , maybe One is human and the Other IS Depression? I esp. like " Cranium crushed" and " Claws lay limp" . i like alliterations. but in 2 days it may be " Claus lies limp" . bri :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 October 2019

An excellent write indeed. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Julia Luber 10 August 2019

Vicous voracious cycle of the wild.

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Pasquale Dimeola 10 August 2019

Poetry is a great way to extract any poison from the past. It also has healing properties. You are slowly stepping out of the shadows into the light. The world is full of beauty. Don't dismiss it. Great writing!

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