Walking in the air, stepping in the wind
should we believe we are flying?
Shattered glass or it will be broken
Do we feel the same thing inside?
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Life has been nicely and touchingly compared with the elements of nature. Marvelous poem shared, thanks.
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It is a marvellous poem on life journey having fantastic depiction and stunning expression. The beginning lines are more attractive. Let me quite.. .. Walking in the air, stepping in the wind should we believe we are flying? Shattered glass or it will be broken Do we feel the same thing inside? If we draw a pictures with different color hues Will we understand the abstract we have done? I feel it is a high philosophical poem shared nicely. Thanks.
Wow...! Sound like an angel speech in written, telling life it bodies are worth constrain to all above, thousand truth, your great in this put to write work success, am also amaze of ur imagery less and apparent as imagined and wonders.
Unwritten soul...touching my soul and my spirit...Also always a lot of reasons to make us to stay calm It's all just in life abstract drawing we need to see clear thing Like when anger in soul keep burning all the trust of anything Fueling by the pain and consuming all innocent dreams Will be someday we regret as nothing left, but just the ashes Ashes of something from something beautiful we dream Could be the ashes just a special life made for one day your words...holding on to life my life of love from within my own world...not the world outtside...I appreciate your mind for my peace of mind...
Lot of reasons to fall but i must grow toward light And my root deeper to earth gravity of life reality One day i will be stronger to face harsh wind Walking in the air, stepping in the wind Flying? yes we can, I believe we can we can flying when spirit is our wings ******** This's my favourite lines....... But we cannot walk or fly through a world with no light, but still we're searching for light and wants to be under its shadow and those light will be the truth, that will lead us to the heights of life..... It's a wonderful poem: : : : : : :
Fully agree. What a wonderful closing line, we can fly when spirit is our wings. Very meaningful poem
A beautiful piece of light, life, a fresh breeze, a sweet scent... Yes we can... I loved the spirit.. the beautiful cycle of life, of nature.. again Soul, you shine... and we shine because you share your light with us... I loved this poem :) Thanks for being the beautiful Soul...
this is a very nice poem..i like the poem because of its quality of flow of thought and flow of content...good play of logic too...it is a celebral poem...keep writing like this poem..top marks 10++++and please read my new poems
I love this poem. in anything, inspiration and belief remains vital.
This poem is like a fresh breeze of wind, and I love the wind! A *&% beautiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes... These days just what I needed to read. Thanks for sharing your Beautiful Soul.
yes we can, i believe we can we can fly when spirit is our wings. indeed a fantastic poem my friend! !
Like this my lil soul. To fly in dreams means We can go any where we want, we can go High into the sky feel the freedom and clear our minds. A fantastic poem my lil soul.
the dust of all our failures becomes the path to our understanding... another very good poem!
The experience of nature in our dreams...a magnificent observation. If we feel rage inside, do we experience the fire? If we deride an old friend, do we feel the chill, the ice? You remind that nature exists inside as well as outside. A great poem, Soul.