Nature Is What You Dont See Comments

i like this one. i am nobody special in the literary field but i know what i like and i do like this one. a little cynical maybe but good

Wow nicely expressed....thanks

Nicely done. Thanks for sharingi

Empirically biased

So great poem sir.....Beautiful thought.....10+++++++++++++

Best poem I ever heard in my life on nature Thank u for such a great poe

Wow What apoem

lovely poem and i enjoy this poem.thanks for shairing this poem..10++++++for it

Nature it is beautiful and the different aspects of nature is beautifully narrated in the poem in its maximum of capability and it is awesome poem.

A poem of investigation...last four lines grace the theme on the whole....thank you

absolutely, it was, it is and it will be as well! ! ! ! ! !

Did you set a camera up to record a summer day. That's what I was picturing that I could see this fast forward over a 24 hour period. Very well done 10++

Er, sorry to interrupt, it's good, but please may I warn you that to a native English speaker (as I am) certain words have an immediate 'switch-off' effect. 'Orgasmic' is one. Others that come to mind are 'vibrant' and 'ultimate'. Anyway, please carry on.

... a delicious poem which Miss Dickinson would have appreciated... i enjoyed it very much... at the risk of being slightly retentive, what appear to me to be mis-spellings of words like 'bosom' and 'orgasmic' are the only negatives... nice work

Nice and beautifully long about the unseen nature.