Monday, August 22, 2016

Nature Is True Guide Comments

Rating: 4.2

They say civilized society needs rules
They who don't follow them are mules
The civilized the laws of Nature flout
Try to knock them out with foul bouts
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C. P. Sharma
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Khairul Ahsan 23 August 2018

'Ghost of global warming stands There is time to make amends' - yes, but the time is running out. Nature is our mother. We must respect her.

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Kelly Kurt 23 August 2018

You, I and every human are part of the whole of nature. What better reason to respect and protect.

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Richard Wlodarski 23 August 2018

A great tribute to Mother Nature! And a timely reminder that we are running out of time! Mr. Sharma, Congratulations, on Poem Of The Day!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 August 2018

A wonderful poem with a powerful message. Congratulation for the poem of the day..........10

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Muzahidul Reza 23 August 2018

Nature is true guide to lead natural life, of course, but to lead social, state, religious life we need more something, ..... well done, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us here in poemhunter

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The Sun, the Moon the Truth and Nature are things we can't change but each of us can learn to appreciate the glory of our planet.. a ten nice poem..

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 August 2018

Very nice poem indeed. Enjoyed and congrats on being chosen as POD. 'Ghost of global warming stands There is time to make amends You can make peace with Nature Give up pride, Nature is true guide..' is very nice.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 August 2018

Very nice poem indeed. Enjoyed and congrats on being chosen as POD.

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Sarah Persson 23 August 2018

The forests rich in varied wildlife Forests, the very breath of life Isn't it ironic that we are intent on destroying what gives life. A very nicely written poem, , congratulations on Poem Of the Day

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 August 2018

Congratulations being chosen as Member Poem Of The Day, dear Mr. Sharma! GBU in Abundance. Amen. A true remarkable poem, like in the era of Adam and Eve, the lion and the lamb live, WOW! But sadly enough, men cannot! The best advice you can give is: You can make peace with Nature Give up pride, Nature is true guide. A 10++++++++ for the vote. Best end rhymes and brilliant advice, Mr. C.P. Sharma Sir!

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Paul Brookes 23 August 2018

It is hard to write descent rhyming poetry and should only be attempted if you have a certain mastery. Though this is a valiant effort this fails to be masterful, with poor rhyme endings. I can see the intent the poor rhyming scheme spoils what could have been a great poem. I think maybe a reworking of the material is in order.

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Adrian Flett 23 August 2018

I must say I agree with Lantz Pierre

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Lantz Pierre 23 August 2018

Oh dear, the rhymes are dreadful. I couldn't continue past the first stanza. If you have something important to say that needs to be given the fullest respect. Becoming a slave to form erases any impact that the content may have. And never hit the reader over the head with a hammer, whether it be in the service of form or content. No one enjoys being hit with a hammer. Try a little subtly.

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So True 23 August 2018

Well put Lantz.

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red hot 23 August 2018

You are a leech. Who is hammering whom here. Enjoy good poetry and appreciate it profusely.

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Lantz Knows 23 August 2018

Lantz is the only true critic. Listen and learn. Red Hot is illiterate as it cannot even write a criticism correctly.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 August 2018

peace with nature, give up pride, good write sir

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 August 2018

The lion and the lamb live together and fly together birds of the feather But men, the enemy of own race Deadly weapons their doom trace........Brilliant expression! A poem well dressed with a precious message! many congratulations for this marvelous piece of poetry being chosen as POD! (10)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 August 2017

Heartiest Congratulations on the Poem of the Day for the great thought provoking and meaningful poem.

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We can't escape from natural laws..Nature rules..good poem.. a ten..

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Rini Shibu 23 August 2017

Congratulations for poem of the day.. Well deserved

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Rajnish Manga 23 August 2017

Environmental degradation is the real threat to man as well as the wild life. It's time to wake up and do whatever we can to salvage the situation. Thanks, Mr Sharma. Ghost of global warming stands There is time to make amends

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2017

Life! ! We all need rules! ! With the muse of righteous laws. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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