Friday, July 28, 2017

Nature Is Just A Name Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tiny potted plants stood in a line
in the well manicured garden
Lush green grass was mowed
into perfect little diamonds.
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Nidhi Agrawal
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Laurie Van Der Hart 31 July 2017

Ok, now I see it quite differently and I understand what you mean. It's an unnatural taming of nature by people.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 31 July 2017

Nidhi, you re-create this beautiful scene perfectly with your words. You really have talent. And do I understand your poem correctly? - the beautifully cultured homes show evidence of meticulous care and design. So too Nature, that people like to call Mother Nature. A cop-out for saying Creator, who, in fact, also has a name, and deserves the praise for his creation.

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Nidhi Agrawal 31 July 2017

Thanks for the praise Laurie. Yes nature also shows great care and meticulous design and certainly deserves praise, but despite the design everything is allowed to be free and changeable which isn't so inside our houses that we want to be perfectly planned and maintained. I hope you can relate to this. And I appreciate your thoughts on this poem.

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