Tuesday, March 28, 2023

Nature Gets Me Through Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature reveals unto me,
So much style and energy,
From a pretty crocus,
To a fine grown tree,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Bri Edwards 28 March 2023

COMMENT THREE (or is it FOUR?) : In lines 8 & 9 I think you DO WANT 'it's', twice, for 'it is', not 'its', for the possessive form of 'it', RIGHT? ! And YOU HAVE IT (twice) . ;) bri 5 stars

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Bri Edwards 28 March 2023

May Nature continue, each day, to be in front of you, but don't forget behind you; it should be there too! Till each day's end, may Nature help 'us' through....blizzards, floods, and tornadoes too! !

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Bri Edwards 28 March 2023

COMMENT ONE: stanza 1: oops! you 'forgot' apostrophe in 'Nature's' Jayne, you seem to end each line with a comma, except the last line of each stanza has '.'. Hmm.

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Jayne Louise Davies

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