Saturday, December 21, 2013

Nature Can What Pen Can't Comments

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When fair words fail to fit in a tired line,
And dainty wit feels shy, comes not as called,
Easy that came ere— out of ten times, nine,
When diction demurs, jagged looks poem's mould,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2019

The mood remains when fickle, rather meek In sympathy with Muse playing hide-seek, Strange things do happen when thoughts fail the pen, To soothe nerves, for old faithful friend I pine—.......loved these lines. A beautiful poem is hauntingly delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

Thanks KM for visiting this sonnet of 2008. Now, you have liked it, unless you are making me feel good. If so, like this there are many good poems that remain buried under this site, not getting attention. I always wonder what can be done.

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