I walked along a country road,
one sunny autumn day.
And gazed upon the beauty,
The woodland did portray.
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Beautifully explained... Your poem shows the ability of never losing hope... Amazingly used colors... Good poem :)
Standing in awe for a wonderful scene in nature makes us really grateful to our Creator. You are right, the message is a bit similar as in 'the cloud' Let us put it this way: great minds think alike :) Your great-aunt must be really happy with such a lovely poem. I think she is lucky to have you.