In sound of stream, in whistle of breeze,
In flight of birds, in buzzing of bees,
In clouds and rain, in rays of sun,
In light of moon, in joy and fun,
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Beautiful, so serene with all the wonders of nature, your true love is smiling from every scene!
Duality of meaning is obvious...i feel the urge of interpreting it more on the spiritual grounds rather than the mundane one...To me here this YOU is God...let me call this balanced and beautiful poem as the Best of Jahan zaib
To see your beloved 's image in everything is experienced when you fall in love with true enthusiasm, sound enchanting, lovely poem
beautifully written....maybe one more word required in last line ie but (a) shade of thee....or (the) i hope you dont mind my suggestion...tyvm karen
Definitely organic feeling grows in me and watered by your words here_Soul
very nice and sweet poem indeed.. like it.. and enjoyed it, too