Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Nature And Woman Comments

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Nature and woman
Both are weakness for man
One sheds tear
Another is made to bear
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Such a lovely poem, and written in such a beautiful manner... Eli Chekhov2 hours ago I love the way you are constantly comparing woman to nature, your argument is very much clear and confident. The message hidden beneath is splendid, and there is a subtle passion in the verse. The rhythm is wonderful, as well as the rhyme. I really wouldn't change a thing. I am definitely interested in your future (and past) pieces) . Thanks for sharing your talent. Love, Eli. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago i did compose today..recent views +1 SO TRUE

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 September 2012

Dianna Williams2 hours ago right on! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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