Wednesday, January 17, 2018

Nature And The Poet Comments

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In a night of full moon and sleepy stars
when his eyes started traveling up in the skies
she looked at him with a humiliating smile
she thought
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 21 January 2018

Your imagination is only surpass by the eloquence of your pen. Thank you sir for blending nature with love and sharing it with us.

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Indira Renganathan 18 January 2018

What an amazing poem from the poet....the way you imagine things is extraordinary Akhtar...no one can surpass thanks a lot for this greatly appealing work

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 January 2018

….so we must look like a lovely couple/Miss Nature if anyone asks your name/reply confidently you are Mrs. Poet…beautiful expression, loved reading it ….10

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Hazel Durham 18 January 2018

Dreamy and so romantuc a feast of beautuful imagery as the two lovers with nature's warm caress and a poet's mighty sword of defence his words that dance with a love so pure! Superb write!

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