Nature 5 - The River Flows Celebrating Her Freedom Comments
The river flows with a powerful ripple,
She streams along the earthy grounds with a trickle,
She skips gently with a spring and sprinkle,
Then, she flows along the current without a wrinkle!
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Amazing flow of a river replicated by the words of matching charm, mood and pace. The personification, first through third person, and then through first person enlivens the portrayal of the stream. It's my pleasure to have read this poem. Thanks, Geeta ji. It goes into MyPoemList.
Powerful ripple we hear. We see the service attitude of grateful river. She skips gently with a spring and sprinkle, and we enjoy the beauty of such beautiful river and and we are motivated by great scenic beauty of river and we have to learn many things about selfless service. This poem is very nice and excellently penned...10
freedom is expressed in a variety a way...nice to ponder on
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7/29/2025 8:22:47 PM # 1.0.0
Beautifully rhyming and musical like the gurgling song of a flowing river! The alliteration is so pleasant! The river enjoys her rambling! Along with her we too are rambling! Lovely write!