Saturday, September 19, 2020

Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature is a mother
Nature is a Beautiful.
Nature is a Ture?
Nature is a mind blowing
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Nayan Das
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Bri Edwards 03 October 2020

I searched and found neither " ture" nor " menation" mentioned as English words. Check your use here of " love's" and " every body" . I'd use " loves" and " everybody" I typed more but lost most of it before sending. Good luck with your English. I'm pretty sure, with more effort and time and exposure to 'correct' English, you will improve. Ask a competent English teacher to help you if you have one. bri ;)

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 September 2020

Write comment. Such a beautiful and natural start, Nayan Das. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Nayan Das 02 October 2020

Thanks Dear And Read my second poem

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