Friday, November 8, 2013

Nature Comments

Rating: 4.8

I gaze around in wonder,
In peaceful solitude;
In dreams I am floating,
In rays of light I bathe;
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

There's so much beauty in disguise, And harmony of thoughts And blissful joy in heart, To contemplate the simple moment, It overwhelms my soul with splendour. Avidly life it's captured and absorbed: .......nice poetic expression. This is really a beautiful poem so touchingly portrayed.10

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Khairul Ahsan 15 July 2016

Just now I've read this wonderful poem of yours-'Nature'. The words are so beautifully woven to make a complete poem on your thoughts of the moment, really nice and wonderful. Particularly, I have liked the following lines: 'In nothingness myself I sink. There's so much beauty in disguise, And harmony of thoughts And blissful joy in heart, To contemplate the simple moment, It overwhelms my soul with splendour; '

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Dimitrios Galanis 15 December 2015

Δυνατό ποίημα.Υπολανθάνει σε σημεία του η θεωρητική ανάλυση και αντίληψη.Καλλίτερα πάντα να εξαφανίζεται, όχι μόνο από το προσκήνιο του ποιήματός, αλλά κι από το ορατό υπόβαθρό του.Το ποίημα θέλει να λειτουργεί σχεδόν μονάχα με εικόνες, όχι με διδακτισμούς και πλάγιες συμβουλές ή αποστάγματα της ''σοφίας'' μας.

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Pradip Dasgupta 10 November 2013

nice poem of nature.

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