Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature, I want to lie
on the soft wavy grass.
Under a shady tree, listening
to the song of the Thrush.
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Neela Nath Das
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Valsa George 21 September 2012

Nature with its green vegetation and all other myriad forms is so soothing...! That's why sages and bards always withdraw into its serenity for solace and inspiration! An enjoyable read!

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Sanjay Mehta 20 September 2012

'Two days ago or after, we will breathe our last' and your use of symbol lamb is wonderful. Materialism and I have overpowered the humans. The elements which were in abundance and had immense power for natural replenishment have been ruthlessly exploited. Numerous signals are being received which are being continually ignored...............still we have time to inculcate symboitic nature of Nature. The write reflects the virginity of nature in true form.10+

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Heather Wilson 19 September 2012

Surrounded by the beauty of nature at its best is just wonderful, to relax and feel free for a while, a lovely poem.

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Valerie Dohren 19 September 2012

Beautiful poem Nil - there is indeed much in nature to calm and bring solace to the weary soul. Very well written.

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