Saturday, January 9, 2010

Natural Symphony Comments

Rating: 5.0

A lightning flash,
A thunder's boom,
The sad song,
That the rain produced,
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Kelly Aragon
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2010

vHits my heart, Like a melody, Strong and scary, Yet beautifully sweet, The patter of the rain, As it hits the ground, The splash of puddles, That children jump on, . it is quite natural for rain to come and cool.. beautifully crafted poem....10 read mine...rain delay.. rain has come... i watched helplessly

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Afzal Shauq 09 January 2010

a positive approach..appreciate you 10/10

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