A new born baby finds,
Even with closed eyes,
Mother's nipple, sucks,
Without prior knowledge,
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@ Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi, Thank you so much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. I am much inspired.
@ Patricia Grantham, Thanks a lot for your thoughtful comments. I am so much inspired by your kind words!
So true as children life is pure and natural. As we become adults we become tarnished and life is blemished. This is a true and well written poem.
Thank you, dear poet @Guy Dimitri Jagodinski, for your thoughtful comment here. Your appreciation is my inspiration.
what are natural and not natural? the opinion of the poet is well expressed here...
An excellent write and really expressive on the natural and unnatural. You described these desires with such force and meanings until it is impossible not to get the full meaning of it. A well crafted poem this is from a talented mind. Enjoyed it!
@ Pradip, I am glad you loved this. Thanks for the comment.
a very good write comparing the natural with the non natural well penned
truth penned in a bold refrain! loved this work, poet.
@ Lonnie Taylor, Thanks for the kind words. I am glad you liked it.
@ Jesse Ellsbury, Thank you very much for your comment. I am truly inspired by your kind words.
Very nice. I love the refrain at the end of each stanza. It really puts perspective on the message of each verse. Well done!
@ Aftab Alam Khursheed, Thank you very much for your kind words.
Nature is the greatest guide.....divine providence under that every thing covers nice and lovely write topic you chose is beautiful
natural and physical, good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
@ Ozark Mountain Homegrown, Thank you very much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it. I am inspired by your inspiration. Greetings for a very happy 2014 and best wishes...