Saturday, August 24, 2013

Natural Comments

Rating: 3.9

A new born baby finds,
Even with closed eyes,
Mother's nipple, sucks,
Without prior knowledge,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 07 January 2014

@ Ozark Mountain Homegrown, Thank you very much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it. I am inspired by your inspiration. Greetings for a very happy 2014 and best wishes...

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Khairul Ahsan 07 January 2014

@ Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi, Thank you so much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. I am much inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 November 2013

@ Patricia Grantham, Thanks a lot for your thoughtful comments. I am so much inspired by your kind words!

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Khairul Ahsan 10 September 2013

@ Heather Wilkins, Thanks for the comment.

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 10 September 2013

So true as children life is pure and natural. As we become adults we become tarnished and life is blemished. This is a true and well written poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 May 2018

Thank you, dear poet @Guy Dimitri Jagodinski, for your thoughtful comment here. Your appreciation is my inspiration.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 September 2013

what are natural and not natural? the opinion of the poet is well expressed here...

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Patricia Grantham 06 September 2013

An excellent write and really expressive on the natural and unnatural. You described these desires with such force and meanings until it is impossible not to get the full meaning of it. A well crafted poem this is from a talented mind. Enjoyed it!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 September 2013

@ Pradip, I am glad you loved this. Thanks for the comment.

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Heather Wilkins 02 September 2013

a very good write comparing the natural with the non natural well penned

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 02 September 2013

truth penned in a bold refrain! loved this work, poet.

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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

@ Lonnie Taylor, Thanks for the kind words. I am glad you liked it.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 August 2013

@ Jesse Ellsbury, Thank you very much for your comment. I am truly inspired by your kind words.

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Jesse Ellsbury 28 August 2013

Very nice. I love the refrain at the end of each stanza. It really puts perspective on the message of each verse. Well done!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2013

Thanks, Lucifera. I am glad you liked it. I am inspired.

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Lucifera Santez 25 August 2013

a very enlightening and real write. liked it. :)

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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2013

@ Aftab Alam Khursheed, Thank you very much for your kind words.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 August 2013

@ Gajanan Mishra, Thanks for your comment.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 August 2013

Nature is the greatest guide.....divine providence under that every thing covers nice and lovely write topic you chose is beautiful

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2013

natural and physical, good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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