'Even to eat a plate of idly for four rupees-
i had to pay a tax of twenty paise' said the autowallah.
'What a profitable country india should be'-
said the autowallah.
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You are picking up good subjects on contemporary situation. But I think u could have put this poem in a more poetic form to achieve maximum effect.....sorry to say this..my frank friendly opinion.
you have written well on the bad side of imposing service tax...the government is perhaps 'taxing' us for rendering 'service'...the word 'dear 'used in dual meaning reads good...thanks for this write...10
the idea is good and thought provoking but i agree with ms. r.
While the Economists may not agreee, your witty piece on the Nations Service tax is great....especially the pun on the word 'dearer' 10++